Monday, November 24, 2014

What my paper needs

I need to add better evidence but I feel like my paper has the right idea to answer the prompt, but my quotes are not giving enough example to support my claims. I think I fulfilled the prompt questions with the correct answers but wrong quotes. I need to remove my personal opinion from my paper it is irrelevant. I need to begin adding in the citations for my evidence. Kaiserman has torn apart my essay so I will scrap it and start over.

1 comment:

  1. To simply put, just follow the prompt. It'll help your essay grade. Use the prompt as your grade to comprehend well for the essay and look at other prezi presentaions as well to help your writing.

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